I can't believe its already second semester! The year has been going by so quickly! This weekend I went out to the barn a ton and worked on my concentration...
So here are my next two concentration pieces! I have a third one but its not completely done yet so i'll post a picture of it later. Can't wait to see everyone's!!
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| So this is the troll thing thats under that one bridge up by Seattle. |
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| And this is the half dome in Yosemite when you're looking from this one viewpoint right off the road that goes through the park. |
These are both really nice Zoe! And the both work well with your concentration!
ReplyDeleteIn the first one, I love the pop of yellow. It makes the drawing interesting and gives a nice emphasis. However, I would like to see more dark values in the troll's face because its getting a little lost in the background.
I really love the second one! The proportion is great! I love how the half dome is towering over the car. The colors are also nice and you have some good dark/light values!
Great job Zoe!
I completely agree with Eva that the first one needs a lot more dark values. Right now, it's very soft, which I think isn't really how the Seattle Troll is haha. It could use a lot more detailed lines and depth for the troll to pop out in a way and be realistic.
ReplyDeleteThe softness in the second one works a lot better (I especially love the blue sky for some reason)!! I'm confused though, is the car parked there, or just driving by these scenery? If it's driving by...might want a driver in there!
The colors in these are beautiful, and they are very well crafted. Yay Zoe! :)
i for sure agree with eva and nina...i would push the value in the top piece. i also really like the pop of yellow! i love the trolls expression in his eyes. for the bottom one i actually wish it was a little crisper...i dont really know if i like the softness. i also think it would look nice if the red was a little bit stronger! but the sky. mountains, and trees look AMAZING!
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